One of the coolest compliments I ever received from a coworker was about me as an editor. In a meeting with our executive director, he described our work relationship as a symbiotic partnership where he "spewed a bunch of crap" on paper, then gave it to me to "become brilliant."
You've probably heard the expression "Keep it simple, stupid." What's true in life is also true in communications -- especially health communications. HCOM has a reputation for being extremely stuffy. And why not? Health content uses so. much. jargon. I mean, people don't really talk like a medical journal ... so why should your writing sound like a medical journal?